thise is by my girlfriend summer she wrote it

January 17, 2008 at 11:03 am (Poetry, my gril frend)

sometimes
They do not see these tears I cry.
I do not think they even try.
I’m handicaped, so when I think of how my life should be I get depressed.
why do I sometimes feel this way well..take a guess!
it feels like noone feels my pain.
I sometimes think I’m insane.
sometimes I think I’m treated unfair,
sometimes I just wish for my feelings, certain people would care!
I wish I could see what’s missing in my life and do….
Whatever it takes to make my dreams come true!!

Written by: Summer Jewele

4 Comments

  1. Kym said,

    Tell Summer she did a beautiful piece. I like the way the fourth line lets a little anger through. I agree with her in the last part especially. “I wish I could see what’s missing in my life and do…./Whatever it takes to make my dreams come true!” I know I feel that way almost every day.

  2. bwe1 said,

    I really like it. The second line says quite a bit to me. I don’t think a lot of people try very hard to see anything at all

  3. Lou FCD said,

    Hi BWE,

    I found your comment in the moderation queue in my dashboard, and I’ll let him know you left a comment.

    (I set up his blog so that I’d have access in case he had any problems. I’m glad I did, because I didn’t notice he’d put Summer’s surname on it. I’m going to redact that.)

    Lou

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